FIRST LOVE

“Hello?”

The deep crackling voice hit Nitika like searing loo. The melodious British accent tingled her feelings tantalizingly.

“Good morning, sir. This is Rebecca from the Integrated Telecom company. I would like to discuss a mobile plan with you.” The Seventeen-year old peeped at the script.

“I already have a good plan, Rebecca.” A pause. “Thank you for calling anyway. Good day.” Click.

She hung on to the phone dreamily for some time. She was sure her dream lover, her prince charming had received her very first call. Then she looked at the idols of Lakshmi and Ganesha next to her computer, that were Baba’s gift in the morning.

She prayed for strength as the voice of her first love reverberated in her heart.

Comments

Lash said…
Thats a smart move! :) Nice to see that you are still writing though the lenghts of your posts ave been cut. Nevertheless keep it up, you are one of my oldest blog mates
D said…
Lolz..this is like the urban legends of call center...i guy speaks to a gurl...she calls him back..love happens..happily married in US ever after...
austere said…
This is sooo cute... puppy love, first love.
herewegoagain said…
Thanks for visiting my blog and commenting. I've been enjoying reading yours too!!

Happy New Year!
Voice said…
Nice..
Reading this post leaves a smile on the face.


Happy New Year
I enjoyed this post. As Voice said, it did leave you with a smile on your face. Best wishes for 2010 Canary.
Yoga Gal said…
Happy New Year!
totaltrauma said…
oh i had a similarish story when i was a fresher!! A certain british Indian called my number twice asking for a 'Nishant' and I told him very politely that no Nishant sat there. I could not be rude cos he was so charming and polite!

he called 10 mins later to say he managed to trace Nishant's new number (as he had changed seats) and gave it to me in case others called asking for him. he he. I thought he would make excuses to keep calling, but he was a thorough gentleman whom I never spoke to again :)
Standbymind said…
You are tagged pal!

http://standbymind.blogspot.com/2010/01/your-dark-resolutions-2010.html

Do your thing!

Happy New Year!
Relyn said…
I've been so busy doing nothing much that I haven't been around to visit my friends old and new. So, though my wishes are late, I mean them with my whole heart. May your year be filled with laughter. May all your surprises be happy ones. May you remember to count your blessings. May you know each day how very much you are loved. Happy new year, my friend.
Spectator said…
who is this she ?
Abhinav said…
wow .. what an opening .. Wish i had taken your help for my MBA applicatin Essays :P .. you provide an amazing opening statement.
Arunima said…
:-)
Abhay said…
a very happy new year to u too...u seem to hav bookmarked my more 'irregular and incoherent' blog....remove that and pls add http://abbchris.blogspot.com to ur feeds (promise u its much btr) :)
Canary said…
@Lash
:) thanks

@D
Really? Wow, I am a script writer!

@austere
:)

@herewe
Thanks!!
Canary said…
@Voice
:) thanks a bunch

@Petty
Thanks and happy new year to you too!

@yogagal
happy new year to you too! :)

@trauma
awwww
Canary said…
@standby
I shall do the thing!

@relyn
:) Thanks!

@spectator
How can you not figure that out?
There is just one female character running throughout the story?

@Abhinav
Great business idea, let me print posters.

@Arunima
:) back

@Abhay
Okie, seems its time for some blog hopping
yourstylentrend said…
that was a complete teenage way to express love.. lolz
How do we know said…
and then? and then?
this is awesome...me back:)
Canary said…
@trend
*Glee* thanks :)

@Howdowe
You encourage me to write a sequel! :P

@DJ
Welcome back!
Halfway reading your blog...
satishds said…
Ek choti si love story?..very nice
caterpillar said…
Hey Canary.... I read your 'About me' section and felt like some one just read out what goes on in my mind at times....this was a nice chance meeting....

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